Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Short Fiction--The Guy Next Door: Part 13

“I can’t stand myself!” the guy next door says.

“Well, that’s a problem,” I smirk. I know he’s referring to his having worked hard all day long and the fact that he’s drenched in sweat, but I enjoy the play on words none-the-less.

“You don’t believe me? Come here--if you really want to smell something gamey, I’ve got game!” He assures me, lifting his right arm and taking a sniff.


I politely decline his offer to smell his reeking pit. He’s voluntarily enlisted in what he calls my ‘Fat Camp” for ten days—gave up precious vacation time to help with some heavy lifting and trudging up steep slopes and flights of stairs. I never promised him a rose garden and he’s annoyed that he doesn’t now smell like one.

GND’s a shower nut—he’s got to have a long hot one at least once a day. The average American takes 8 minute showers consuming two and a half gallons of potable water a minute. Not this guy. Nope, he needs another 22 minutes to thoroughly eliminate his gaminess. He’s all man, this one is. He’d crawl out of his own skin from sheer disgust if he was in a situation where he couldn’t immerse himself in half an hour of pounding steaming water. He, like other Americans, takes several showers some days.

“I may have been born in the South, but I AM civilized,” he explains. I believe him. He is not, nor would he ever want to be, a trail “grubby” like I am.

I like to bathe as much as the next gal, but I have a thing for water—a consciousness of water, or rather, the lack thereof. I’ve lived in places where water is serious business. Here, on the East Coast, people waste it with little to no awareness that the US consumes the lion’s share of the globe’s potable water—most of which is used to flush feces and keep folks odor free. With no awareness that there are parts of this country that have no accessible potable water and have to buy it from four states away.

To finish his daily toilet, GND will use 75 gallons for his luxurious showering, another gallon brushing his teeth, another to shave, and up to three gallons to complete his morning constitutional. That’s 80 gallons a day at the minimum that this single man uses strictly for his personal hygiene. And yet, he’s hardly the only American who does this without thinking twice. Most of us will use another 100 gallons throughout the day.

With less that 1 percent of the world’s water being accessible and potable, it will never cease to amaze me that we—an evolved and intelligent species—still shit on such a rare commodity as if it’s our god given right to. But, then, we pour potable water onto pesticide drenched golf courses and farm fields, too, so I shouldn’t be surprised.

Because awareness is everything, I give the man grief. Also, because he drinks very little water compared to that which he consumes.

“Ever hear that we’re supposed to drink eight 8-ounce glasses of water a day?”

He tells me he drinks coffee. And gin. And bourbon.  I stare him down.

“If I drank that much water I’d be peeing all the time!” he says.

“That’s the idea, champ. To rid your body of toxins, which is vital when you’re on a diet in particular, and to lubricate your innards.”

He stares back at me stubbornly wishing he could come up with a witty response to my ‘lubricated innards’ line. But, he can’t so he just stares at me in frustration. I’m hard, he’s thinking, unrelenting.

“It also prevents wrinkles,” I add.

The ploy worked because he’s now drinking water by the liter. And as he stands in front of me hydrating, literally dripping, looking as if I had taken a hose to him, I note that he’s lost poundage.

“Yep, he admits. I gained three notches on my belt!” he proudly shows me.


He can complain about me all he wants, but he’s signed up for three more weekends at my Fat Camp, so I can’t be all that bad. Or, perhaps he’s just a glutton.

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